Wah..nampaknya ruangan CIT CAT DA'VOICE (1) mendapat sambutan yang hangat drpd pembuka2 blog ini. Mungkin faktor populariti komposer muda, Mamu Lara, menyebabkan ramai org merasa perlu utk menghantarkan komen kepada hasil karya beliau.
So, untuk kali ini, saya buka lagi gelanggang CIT CAT DA'VOICE dengan mempertaruhkan sebuah lagu Inggeris yang dihasilkan oleh seorang lagi anak muda belia harapan bangsa kita, iaitu BayZack (glamernye name ni!). Lagu yg berjudul ONLY GOD ini merupakan salah satu daripada beberapa karya beliau yang telah mencuri perhatian ramai pihak, terutamanya Pak Ali. Dengan muzik yang ber'genre'kan California Rock, lagu ini terus mendapat tempat di hati peminat sehingga ia telah dirakamkan di studio. Kali ini, saya harap anda semua memberikan ulasan terhadap semua aspek lagu tersebut, dari lirik, muzik, konsep lagu sehinggalah kpd komposer itu sendiri (perlu ke?). Anyway, hantar komen ye!!
Only God...
Deep in my humble heart,
I’m seeking upon His Lights,
Who controls my body and soul,
He deserves everything,
By the name of The Creator,
Who posesses the Day of Judgement,
And all praises be to God,
For giving us serenity,
Welcoming good, and avoiding evil,
Worshipping Him with sincerity,
Don’t let faith fade away,
Do binding it, within your life,
Repeat second verse
And we must go, towards the right path,
Sacrificing fisabilillah,
Obeying His Book, and realising Sunnah,
And be sincere and kind Ummah,
21 comments:
Mmm...i like this song! Lagu yg BayZack buat ni mmg penuh dgn pengertian. Walaupun muzik lagu ni ber'genre'kan California Rock, tapi lirik lagu ni very the ketuhanan. BayZack mmg seringkali menghasilkan lirik2 lagu yg membawa pendengar utk mengingati Tuhan, & ini adalah satu usaha yg sgt baik. Saya selalu gak memutarkan lagu ni, dan part yg paling best ialah suara latar time chorus. Macam ada suara yg agak menonjol berbanding dgn yg lain, dan suara tu kedengaran ala2 suara second!
suara second davoice mmg agak menonjol mengalahkan unicern...gaya plak mengalahkan misha omar..
-ajip-
Jeles lah tu suara second aku sedap x macam suara unicern yg ala2 suara Atie AF (adabi).
Xbaik mendengki sesama islam
Zimmmmm.....tuik...tuik....tuik...
-Nazri-
jgn lupa tau,suara unicerne adalah suara yg paling konfem dan kurang bermasalah.....
-ajip-
Excuse me..this post is to comment the lyric of my song not to discuss how harmonised you are...actually i did not really like the way pakcik Ali arrange the music of this song because he used country type of genre..so i asked Clarvie Melissa, one of coursemate to rearrange it...luckily, her brother, Clario want to help me...and for me the rythm is the best so far...and believe it or i have performed it during TESL nite and they wow me...the song and the music is so touching and i think Clario insisted the so called "soul" to my song instead of uncle Ali..a bit slow and soul ..i think i feel great after singing the new version of "the Only God"
Apasal ade comment yg kena delete tu? Ada mana2 pihak yg boleh menjelaskan perkara ni? Aku agak setuju dgn ajip, sebab suara unison lah suara yg paling asas, konfem, serasi dan penting. Tanpa unison, maka tak bergunalah suara2 yg lain, hatta suara third atas mono sekalipun (suara yg konon2nya paling susah nak dibuat). However, pujian juga harus diberikan kpd yg empunya suara second Da'Voice kerana mempunyai suara yg sangat unik dan halus, so mudah utk digandingkan dgn mana2 suara unison. Mmm...suara base jgn dilupakan ya!:)
I deleted because tersilap ma...ada words yang tertinggal dan sebagainya
Wah...adeeq, pandai ko bodek aku ngan ajip yerrrr. Bajet ko kaunselor nak mendamaikan aku ngan ajip lah. Aku dan ajip adalah musuh ketat!!!!!!!wawawawawawwa
Tapi apapun, Gomok adalah the best kaunselor...hehehehe
Woit Bayu aku nak dengar the latest version of 'Only God'. send lah kat aku di alamat: Mohamed_Nazri2000@yahoo.com
Lagu semut xmau rearrange ker, alah tukar lirik jer, sedap lah lagu tu.
Komen ke 10 tu aku yg publish
-NAZRI-
Nnti ler..mcm maner nak attach minus one tu ahh..tak reti ler...actually takler superb sgat minus one yng Clario buat tu but it has the element of choir style..itu yang i suka tu...actually minus one lagu semut tu aku guna untuk lagu Back To Him but i've changed the lyric to make sure it suit to Semut's song...
ala lagu semut tu....mungkin perlu ubah binatang lain aga lebih mesra alam...ala2 zoo negara..
-ajip-
Yer ker bayu....tukar lirik xper. aku restukan, tp tolonglah jgn ubah langsung melodinya. Melodi tu catchy tau. Mana nak cari lagu nasyid yg berunsurkan jazz....hehehehhe....ajip jeles lah tu. dahlah masa recording lagu semut, suara ko masuk dulu. habis lingkup lagu aku. kalo tak bleh jadi juara carta hits 1 tau!!!!!!!!!!!Bayu, aku nak tengok lirik baru lagu semut tu
-NAZRI-
Back To Him
When you say, you are the hero,
Proudly showing to the mankind,
Intending to be the great man,
You forget His existence,
When you show, you are the hottest man,
Arrogantly to the girl there,
Never thinking about God the Almighty.
repeat Verse 1 and 2
sambung kemudian...
sambung balik
Ooo man, please remember,
You are born to be Caliph of the world,
Lead them properly, not abusively,
Don't let him in anger...
bridge
Ooo man, you won't stand forever,
Nothing everlasting but Him,
From him, we have come, to him we will come..
So coming back to him.
Lyric: Bayzack
Song: Mamu Lara
Mamu, i've attached the new version of "The Only God". Hopefully you enable to listen to it because it is touching and tranquil like "bayu"...he..he
aku dah dengar versi baru only god, sedap gak muzik dia. Cool jer. Tp apsal masa masuk part korus aku rasa mcm x kena jaa.... maybe aku kurang penghayatan. aku kena gali lg maksud lagu nie. hehehehe....anyway a lot better than versi pak ali. 10000 times batter. Lagu semut xmau buat arrangement baru kaaa?
Tp melodi jgn ubah lah. Kekalkan unsur jazz...bila dah cukup 10 lagu bleh lah ko kuar dgn album nasyid pertama dlm bahasa inggeris...syabas Bayu
Actually, chorus part is lil bit different because i ask clario to lowered down the key...so you have to sing differently...you have to feel it...you will know how to sing it..one more...after first chorus you have to repeat first and second verse. Actually i've made several songs after "The Only God" and "Back To Him"...for instances..."Peace upon be Muhammad", "Islam = Peaceful", Journey in servant's life, and many more that i've planned to compose...the problem is I don't know how to arrange the music and don't know any music arranger. Any suggestion...???(apart from Pak Ali and Mazli)..
Wah..wah..wah..rancak sungguh perbualan diantara dua orang anak seni ni. Inilah yg dikatakan sbg perbualan yg profesional. Perbualan yg hanya berkisar ttg kerjaya dan profesion (kerjayanya!!).
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